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Así que crees que puedes diferenciar
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Y que ellos te puede intercambiar
¿tus héroes por fantasmas?
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¿Y cambiarías una caminata en guerra
Por un rol de líder en una jaula?
Ojalá, ojalá estuvieras aquí
Sólo somos un par de almas perdidas nadando en la misma pecera
año tras año
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nooo pues si esta denso, aun que lei la acotacion que no lo escribio uste mesmo, de cualquier forma aaa tiene lo suyito con tintes existencialistoides pitufantes y chukilosos, de cualquier manera la estructura es un asco, existe un mal manejo argumentativo y ademas el uso de la tercera persona como recurso desesperado le da el matiz de un escrido digno de un imberbe adolecente 16añeropuñeteroypanchero y ademaaaaaaaas punkoso eterno incomprendido que le reprocha al mundo cuan dificil es su existencia ..
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Manu:
En verdad que tu comentario me despertó un grado de admiración porque, creeme que se necesita bastante VALOR para poder criticar a un compositor reconocido mundialmente y, con el gran talento que la mayoría de los que leemos éste blog quisieramos tener... en fin; no te caería mal aprender a analizar previamente de forma coherente al hacer tu crítica sabiendo de atemano qué es lo que criticas, fundamentando tus argumentos con algunos conocimientos previos acertados al respecto....
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hey hijo mio no se estrese, se perfectamente quien es el autor del escrito y el contexto en el cual se desarrolla tambien me agrada, pero el hecho de tener un analisis objetibo de tal escrito no quiere decir que este en contra ni de ti, ni de los que les gusta pink floyd jajaja digo, siii estaremos de acuerdo que al igual que jim morrison pudieron tener cierto merito como escritores, poetas y demas, empero, no por ello se les exime de la posibilidad de que puedan tener errores en cuanto a la validez de su escrito y/o discurso.
en pocas palabras hijo mio, la fama no hace al maestro y si de una u otra forma hice una critica no fue con el afan de ofender a nadie, por otro lado, si tienes un blog habierto a la lectura de miles de usuarios en red y no puedes soportar un comentario (que de antemano no es personal es solo simple opinion) que no comulgue del todo con sus gustos y/o pensamientos con la pena pero de haberlo sabido antes psss ni comento.
entienda camarada, que habra siempre opiniones diversas, es como si yo hiciera un blog, y me aventara mis chorones de filosofia y demas , de repente habra alguien a quien no le guste por ejemplo hobbes o hegel o kant y por el contrario le encante nietzsche, obiamente si pongo un escrito de kant o hegel , este otro usuario tan libre de opinar como todos, va hacer trisas la cita y/o escrito, y yo como titular del blog habre de distinguir que el hecho de k no le guste hegel no kiere decir que lo hiciera con mala intencion
asi que disculpas de antemano y prometo no comentar jajajajajajajajajjajajaja no quiero causar indigestion a un gordo tan prexioxo jajajaj
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tu eres la/el que no debe de estresarse mi estimad@ manu, JAMAS se te menciono que no queria que comentaras si no estabas de acuerdo con lo que se publicaba, solamente hice enfasis en que se debe de hacer un analisis antes de comentar o criticar, (que por cierto muchas personas lo hacemos sin tener idea de lo que decimos o argumentamos...y no lo digo por ti)
sientase con la entera libertad de comer en este blog lo que guste, tambien de tomar o comentar lo que sea, de la misma manera como me sentire libre de analizar sus comentarios y obviamente opinar al respecto
asi que no se me hachicopale, la indigestion solo me da con las cosas importantes, y creo que este no es el caso...
saludos!
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Nombre: Given
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nooo pues si esta denso, aun que lei la acotacion que no lo escribio uste mesmo, de cualquier forma aaa tiene lo suyito con tintes existencialistoides pitufantes y chukilosos, de cualquier manera la estructura es un asco, existe un mal manejo argumentativo y ademas el uso de la tercera persona como recurso desesperado le da el matiz de un escrido digno de un imberbe adolecente 16añeropuñeteroypanchero y ademaaaaaaaas punkoso eterno incomprendido que le reprocha al mundo cuan dificil es su existencia ..
bueno ya yayay a
uste me habra de disculpar mi buen gordo pero pues ya ve como soy
la niña es risueña y le hacen cosquillas, el negro es rumbero y le dan maracas nooooooooo por mas omenos por las mesmas
jajaj
portese mal cuidese bien
hasta el proximo post